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Writing Credits for David Holzman's Diary

David Holzman's Diary (1967), an early example of the mockumentary genre, has no onscreen writing credits (presumably to keep up the illusion that it is a documentary). Every contemporary source I could find, including IMDb, AFI, and the Library of Congress National Film Registry personnel credits, either leaves out the writing credits or credits Jim McBride (the film's director) as the writer.

Oddly, a 1970 paperback edition of the screenplay contradicts this. Its credits read: "A screenplay by L. M. Kit Carson from a film by Jim McBride".

ISBN: 9780374135201

Carson, the film's lead actor, has 11 writing credits on IMDb from 1971-2003. McBride has 9 credits (including two uncredited) from 1967-2009.

While the contemporary sources are pretty consistent in naming McBride as the "writer-director", I uncovered no primary sources corroborating that. Instead, I found a book released much closer to the film's release date crediting Carson as the author.

What could be the reason for this discrepancy? Do the credits of the paperback screenplay have any bearing on how the film itself should be credited?

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Why is this thread marked "Solved"? I don't see an answer here.

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@gromit82​ I answered my own thread, but the comment is hidden because I included an external link. I found an article of a 2024 interview with the director Jim McBride. He said:

There was no script for DAVID HOLZMAN; only a few notes to myself. But most of the time, I knew very clearly what I wanted to do. Of course, it changed a great deal during the shooting. The film was shot in snatches over a period of months, and sometimes, in periods of inactivity. I would get a new idea or discard an old one. 

The article also included a footnote directly mentioning the 1970 screenplay:

1. Cf. the “screenplay” of the film  — actually a description of the film written after the fact by L.M. Kit Carson, who plays David Holzman — published by Farrar, Straus & Giroux, New York, 1970.

That seemed like a reasonable explanation to me, so I marked it as the accepted answer.