Which plot outline is superior?

@keyword_expert​ Thanks for the input. Your suggestions are valid for both versions. However, there can only be one plot outline per title on IMDb, so I'm left wondering which of these you think should be chosen.

@timothy_gray_el34lojg1aih1​ 

I still like them both; I don't prefer one or the other. You are a good writer. 

@keyword_expert​ Thanks, but I actually only wrote the first one. The second one is a Google translate version of the current Spanish language plot outline, which I discovered after submitting my own. It was then that I began second-guessing as to which outline was superior.

@eboy​ I know this. This is why I'm asking which of the above plot outlines deserves to be the only plot outline.

@timothy_gray_el34lojg1aih1​ Does IMDb not allow more than one plot outline?

@keyword_expert​ No, it does not. The plot outline is the brief one- or two-sentence summary that appears first under the title on the main page and in lists/search results; there can be only one summary in that spot, so there's no point allowing two.

I've seen IMDb title pages that have more than one plot outline item, I think, but it may go against guidelines to purposely attach two of the same language on the same title entry, especially if from a single plot author. Certainly the system will only display one of these items on the base page.

@jeorj_euler​ 

I looked it up, and here is the guideline:

A maximum of one outline is allowed per title and locale - rather than deleting the live one and/or adding a new one, please modify the existing item instead.