Submitting a goof, rejected twice, what am I doin wrong?

New member, submitted and edited goof submission 2 times.

Don't want to try again until I know what is wrong with my submissions.

Found and read the guidelines, and think I met the requirements.

250102-011415-786000

-first try

250107-041534-34800

-second try, fixed timestamp and shortened post.

Was it rejected because of my comments at the bottom? Is the timestamp still wrong, or since I had it in two lines and it posted it as one line with no space at the period?

Is it just poorly written?

TIA