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Thursday, January 30th, 2025 4:50 PM

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Plot outline corrections

Hi, Here are 3 plot outline corrections I asked for that were declined: 1- Spare Keys (« Fifi » as original French title): The current English plot outline is ambiguous and suggests a romantic story. As I saw the film, I prefer talking about a « budding relationship » than « a romantic relationship ». Indeed, none of both protagonists cross the line, the girl being 15 years old and the guy being 23 years old. It’s more about a platonic relationship that grows, unfolds and make both protagonists change during the movie. Here is my contribution: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250124-182636-923000 Here is a movie review in English: https://cineuropa.org/en/newsdetail/430879 2- Un Verano Con Fifi (« Fifi » as original French title): See my « 1- » here above, as it is the same movie and the same kind of problem with the Spanish (Mexico) plot outline (« romantic relationship » instead of « budding relationship »). Here is my contribution: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250128-124510-180000 Here is a movie review in Spanish: https://www.elcinedeloqueyotediga.net/pelicula/show/un-verano-con-fifi 3- Asteroid City: The current Spanish (Mexico) plot outline is quite long (supposed to be short) and we can say the same thing with fewer words. Here is my contribution: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250128-122708-185000 Here is the Spanish Wikipedia page of the movie: https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asteroid_City Best regards

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2 months ago

Hi @Sebastien - I have reviewed these Plot Outlines and the changes have now been approved. They should be live on the site shortly. Cheers!