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Saturday, March 29th, 2025 11:52 AM

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Plot outline corrections declined

Hi, I submitted the three plot outlines corrections here after, but they were declined and I do not understand why. 1- Miss Stevens (2016) - Portuguese plot outline: Here is my contribution: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250317-182538-657000 There is a unnecessary comma placed before a conjugated verb. Moreover, I prefer a neutral wording, without using any unnecessary melodramatic tone (« com o coracao partido »). Please find evidence: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Miss_Stevens 2- Anora (2024) - Portuguese plot outline: Here is my contribution: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250317-193631-627000 I tried to avoid repetitions and awkward wording (the 2 subordinate clauses introduced by « quando » in the same sentence). Please find evidence: https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anora 3- Port Authority (2019) - Mexican Spanish plot outline: Here is my contribution: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250323-213113-286000 The current plot outline is written in only one long sentence, which makes it difficult to read. There are unnecessary words like « esta historia relata ». Please find evidence: https://www.filmaffinity.com/mx/film465921.html Thanks for your help Best regards

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15 days ago

Hello Sebastien I have re submitted and approved the Plot correction, the changes will be live on the site shortly!