Incorrect Plot Outline repeatedly declined – Fantomele se grăbesc (1966)

I am trying to correct the existing English Plot Outline for Fantomele se grăbesc (1966). The current outline contains a misspelled character name (“Trebon” instead of “Tribon”) and several grammatical problems that make the English difficult to understand.

I have submitted corrections several times through the standard contribution system, including supporting evidence from CineMagia, but the corrections have repeatedly been declined as “Does not meet contribution guidelines.”

The existing text is:

“A happy family only in appearance: the father Trebon and his daughter Paula. A real love, for doctor Munteanu and a dubious suitor, an Italian singer, whom the father wants to use for the purpose of going abroad.”

My proposed correction is:

"Paula, the daughter of an eccentric clock collector, falls in love with young doctor Andrei Munteanu against her father's wishes, while a series of mysterious events begins to reveal secrets from the past."

It's concise, fluent, intriguing, spoiler-free, and comfortably under IMDb's 240-character limit.

It tells the reader who the protagonist and love interest are, establishes the conflict, and signals the mystery/thriller element without revealing Tribon's identity or the criminal conspiracy.

I initially tried to replace the inaccurate outline with the following accurate, spoiler-free outline; after that was rejected, I tried increasingly conservative edits of the existing text, but those were also rejected.

Could an IMDb staff member please review the existing outline and advise why the correction is being rejected?