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I got the same problem on another edit: Before [last lines] Justin Long (Alvin): Boy! I suddenly got really, really tired. Justin Long (Alvin): [laughs] Night, Dave! Jason Lee (Dave): Alvin! After [last lines] Justin Long (Alvin): Oh boy, I suddenly got really really tired, heh heh. Night, Dave. [turns the lights off as Dave yells... ] Jason Lee (Dave): ALVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN!

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7 months ago

The stage direction should appear prior to the quote, not after; try putting [yelling, after Alvin turns the lights off] before Dave's last line.

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7 months ago

The quote guidelines say: Please do not use UPPER CASE to denote shouting (use the stage direction [shouts] instead)